freestyle poetry game……..
ok, so i was just thinking about something, and figured i would try and give it a go. the idea is i will get some sort of poetry going, and the next person can take over, down the line. in other words, i want this to end up as ONE long poem. it doesnt have to necessarily be about any one topic in particular. also as a side note i really dont consider myself any kind of skilled poet, but i do like to play with words…..
as the world spins my mind around time that doesnt exist, i question the meaning of everything, i strive, i reach for bliss
In this here back door country i will carry no burden, behind this curtain
Disturbing thoughts & peace bend my knees in shapes of happiness,
I’ve had it all. Took the fall and turned into spring.
doctrines written on rolls of toilet paper
Glossy pages stare straight back
bitch imma pick the world up and drop it on you fucking headdddddd
@Joe, I know lil’ wayne likes getting high… but c’mon.
Joe knows his flows, but dope’s got his flair
He misses rhythm to his rhyme
Make me proud Joe
It’s unreal and hollow, they say, it’s all fake. Yet they blindly follow, and continue to ache. Truth right before them, they deny it, someone bigger tells them to throw away truth and defy it.
Bright people knowing the truth, wanting change but too afraid of what isn’t, every way I look. Nobody ever hid the truth, but made us despise it with blackboards and with books.
As we witness the miseryfest, puppet games of the un-gentle giant in the west, my body and spirit become a fist.
A warrior soul is nothing to hide, some fighting is needed for people to abide, even to peace and to what’s true. A peaceful warrior is you.
We are not dead everyone said yet each retreated into their head, rejecting what’s true. Father please forgive them for they know not what they do.
who are they, them nameless faces,
I am Them to know you is why.
When you look
Their mysterious eyes
When you focus
I’ve never been good at poetry, so
These portraits and secrets,
Such unity demands
Do you see? asked of a line…
Epic!!! Totally epic! You not only totally got the poem but you “finished” it too! You are now my total poetry soul mate! I wrote that in college and thought it needed something more…perfect, truly. <3
Yes we hold each other
When we achieve none
I sit and stare, caring less.
Can someone please wake
Shake these thoughts from my head
Shine and gather,
Travel light and wonder often
As is love for those who dare
For the arduous path of those seeking truth,
We wander thru this night
So astray from the religion
My kingdom is broken to stardust
The lost harvests happiness
@SomethingWitty That was incredible
Sinful oh as i depart
Oh haughty heads who stand like steel
While deacons lick their holy lips
I’ll dip my head in Holy ink
I am lost, I am lost
So, I sit, I think, I meditate
Then, it comes to me.
I just have to remember,
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