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jep
(@tooth) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

ok, so i was just thinking about something, and figured i would try and give it a go. the idea is i will get some sort of poetry going, and the next person can take over, down the line. in other words, i want this to end up as ONE long poem. it doesnt have to necessarily be about any one topic in particular. also as a side note i really dont consider myself any kind of skilled poet, but i do like to play with words…..

as the world spins my mind around time that doesnt exist, i question the meaning of everything, i strive, i reach for bliss
the beating heart of our universe breathes life into tomorrow, is another dimension, the fifth curvature, the pain and the sorrow
we can erase and deface everything in sight, but by my will is my power, we change, we delight
join with me in resisting the wrongs, desisting the throngs of faceless corporate predators, and to no longer buy in, to their wills, and their spills
only we can save ourselves, outnumber and outsmart the cells, break free from the fires of tomorrow, only we can lead, only they can follow

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Syn.Ther.
(@luna) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

In this here back door country i will carry no burden, behind this curtain
I can be free and easy. Do what pleases me, write rock poetry or masturbate loudly.
For all to see not a thing.

Disturbing thoughts & peace bend my knees in shapes of happiness,
make me confess. To the dear heart I hold, that untold breaks
lay waiting round each beat of this path.

I’ve had it all. Took the fall and turned into spring.
Not a thing can stop this summer humming around.
Bold sounds of bathing sunlights, cats out for dogfights.
Never reaching the golden shores of my back door country.

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SomethingWitty
(@mynameisjosh) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

doctrines written on rolls of toilet paper
and barside napkins like a fantasy novel;
all dreamed the impossible–
a four door
two floors
and a domesticated pet
to mirror the emptiness
predicated on hedgefunds and white collar sex
wine glasses with red lips
and a bucket of collogen hips.
For these parlor tricks, philosophers are villified
into self-help DIY writers.
Get me a lighter.
I’ll set this system of gimmicks on fire.

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Lexi
(@lexi) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

Glossy pages stare straight back
tempting us to emulate
the perfect
the ideal
the impossible.
Immense boards of processed tree
telling us what we should want,
masking what is already free

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Anonymous
(@) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

bitch imma pick the world up and drop it on you fucking headdddddd
i coudl die now rebirth mother fucka
jump into my space ship and leave earth mother fucka
im gone

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SomethingWitty
(@mynameisjosh) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

@Joe, I know lil’ wayne likes getting high… but c’mon.

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Syn.Ther.
(@luna) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

Joe knows his flows, but dope’s got his flair
now he stares into the darkness
wishes he could diss
but no, the blow goes down like this.

He misses rhythm to his rhyme
time was not on his side
couldnt hide this evil poem
But don’t fear we ll hear Joe as we know’m
and cheer.

Make me proud Joe

Peace

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Frälsaren
(@manimal) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

It’s unreal and hollow, they say, it’s all fake. Yet they blindly follow, and continue to ache. Truth right before them, they deny it, someone bigger tells them to throw away truth and defy it.

Bright people knowing the truth, wanting change but too afraid of what isn’t, every way I look. Nobody ever hid the truth, but made us despise it with blackboards and with books.

As we witness the miseryfest, puppet games of the un-gentle giant in the west, my body and spirit become a fist.

A warrior soul is nothing to hide, some fighting is needed for people to abide, even to peace and to what’s true. A peaceful warrior is you.

We are not dead everyone said yet each retreated into their head, rejecting what’s true. Father please forgive them for they know not what they do.

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Syn.Ther.
(@luna) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

who are they, them nameless faces,
them illusive gazes with prying eyes.
Them lies in light of this another side.
whom fight, hide in their own right.
Them in the light cast shadow, them grow
Them know all as me and I.

I am Them to know you is why.

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Heather
(@mrsgalouzis) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

When you look
at a portrait
on a wall
What do you see?

Their mysterious eyes
hiding secrets
from the world

Button nose
wrinkled up
in laughter

Funny freckles
left over from youth
like memories

The smile
friendly, open
trusting

Pinkened lips
inviting a kiss
from the one they love

Their chin
forward in pride
from accompishments

OR

When you focus
really look hard…
Do you see yourself?

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Dustin
(@dobbyfisher) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

I’ve never been good at poetry, so
with caution now, I’ll give it a go.
Amateur I am, but still I would love
to continue the story of Heather above:

These portraits and secrets,
they scream from the wall
Your are me
We are you

Such unity demands
and begs to be true
Destroy the mine
Destroy the you.

Do you see? asked of a line…
Aye my eye it finds the mine,
in painted heritage and wisdom of thine
Now and past must learn to find
We breath the same air
and share the same time.

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Heather
(@mrsgalouzis) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

Epic!!! Totally epic! You not only totally got the poem but you “finished” it too! You are now my total poetry soul mate! I wrote that in college and thought it needed something more…perfect, truly. <3

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Matt
(@matts) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

Yes we hold each other
Have each other in our minds
But when we look into our eyes
We can we can see our selfless demise
For unity comes from the soul
And we were meant to be together as one
But one is not unity
Unity is only none.

When we achieve none
We will finally know
That which can hold us together in tow
Can the love be achieved
When it comes from the mind
For love comes from the soul
and the soul is the supreme none.

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Syn.Ther.
(@luna) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

I sit and stare, caring less.
an hourglass full of Rerun after rerun
IT’s no fun in here I’m done, no fear.
.

Can someone please wake
.

Take
.

Shake these thoughts from my head
the sad and secret hate
the blind faith
and all of the opinions
lacking space
for mine.
.

Shine and gather,
birds of a feather
and those associated
with occasional flight
.

Travel light and wonder often
the now and long forgotten
are among us.

As is love for those who dare
she cares
still.

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jonathan
(@onyx) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

For the arduous path of those seeking truth,
All the strength they can muster, every nail, every tooth,
May the universe provide the light we can look toward,
In all turbulence it is the fastening cord,
Letting elements slam us from every side,
You and I have the strength, the will to survive.

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Syn.Ther.
(@luna) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

We wander thru this night
waiting for the moment to arrive
a final breath we sigh
and fly on angel wings of gold.
Lost we are in this being
this solid state of confusion
no recollections, just illusion.
Only the bold seek happiness.
Truth lies waiting
betrayed and raped by time.
.

So astray from the religion
we have chosen to respect.
It could be left to memory
or even lost to neglect
For the believer has fled
into the forest of deceit
woven by the one legged spider
saying he´s got all we need.
.

My kingdom is broken to stardust
so dearly shattered across
so wounded in the daylight
by the awareness of great cost.
She sold a many dreams
to seemingly hopeless souls.
All lived beyond their means
as was apparently their goal.
.

The lost harvests happiness
stretching their steel curtains.
Slowly seeking to caress the past
or unlock their seeds of burden.
Crying in distant harmony
but not in any way in fear
calling out to you
Look see what you´ll hear.

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Alex
(@alexishungry) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

@SomethingWitty That was incredible

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Chris
(@ligthouse) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

Sinful oh as i depart
into the lofty depth of art
put your hands to godly prayer
for this soul all lost in air.

Oh haughty heads who stand like steel
and bend their wills to cop-a-feel
and work their hands to turn a wheel
wrought with depth of curb appeal;

While deacons lick their holy lips
sewing seed with chains and whips
dancing and then taking tips
drinking wine and eating chips,

I’ll dip my head in Holy ink
open up my heart to think
bend my mind only to speak
and shake the rocks off yonder peak.

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Matt
(@matts) 1 year, 9 months ago ago

I am lost, I am lost
I forgot my bread crumbs at home.
I travel down these dark alleys of my mind.
But, I came to the crossroads of all
I don’t know which way to go.

So, I sit, I think, I meditate
Things get clearer, yet the concept is still far.
Once I thought I found the way only for it to be lost again.
So, I sit, I think, I meditate some more.

Then, it comes to me.
Something, which I should have realized long ago
It does not matter which way I go.
I will always find the way back home.

I just have to remember,
No regrets,
Don’t turn back.
I shall always find my way back home.

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