In the Dark
Would you give me the chance to look in Your eye?
By A thing more provident than Chance
The Energy flows
@grosshaj, put more feeling into it, develop a vocabulary, use metaphors to stimulate the flux of sentiments through symbols, it
@seeker, Thank you for your feedback. :) You are welcome to read and comment on anything I produce. Encouragement for reading aloud. :)
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