Paradise

1 year, 11 months ago

It seems they don’t want me in Paradise anymore
Appearently i don’t meet the stanards they’ve set in their book of commands
My loving and caring father wont let me back in until i appologize for some wrong doing
It appears that the people i commue with have not followed his commandmants
Therefore i have broken them by default
I am to be shunned by all those in Paradise until I have appologized for this attrocity
Those who are forced to speak to me speak only in awful tones
They look down upon me for fear of violating the same command as I
I’ve been told that if i don’t appologize soon i will be burned and tortured in the forseeable future
So it goes

January 1, 2013 at 11:24 pm

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Profile photo of Pychonaught Pychonaught (@ironmidget) 1 year, 11 months ago ago

@onewithyomoma, I really can’t help but quote Willy Wonka :D

If you want to view paradise, Simply look around and view it. Anyone you want to, do it. Wanna change the world? There’s nothing to it.

Personally, I think original sin is ridiculous. I don’t think a generous, compassionate, intelligent, God would do such a thing. I think people wrote that bit in to control others, so they would keeping paying for confessions and be loyal to the church. I don’t recall finding something comparable to original sin in other religions or spiritual practices. (Maybe there are I could be wrong)

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Profile photo of Pychonaught Pychonaught (@ironmidget) 1 year, 11 months ago ago

lol I meant to say ANYTHING not anyone, but w/e

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